Ode on a Grecian Frisbee
by Jack
Thou still unravish'd bride of quietness,
Thou foster-child of Silence and slow Time,
Sylvan historian, who canst thus express
A flowery tale more sweetly than our rhyme:
Well that just sounds silly.
I think I'll do my own.
Thou still unravish'd bride of quietness,
Thou foster-child of Silence and slow Time,
Sylvan historian, who canst thus express
A flowery tale more sweetly than our rhyme:
Well that just sounds silly.
I think I'll do my own.
O* plastic disc,so sleek and round
You fly on goss'mer wings.
When held aloftyour symbols shine,
like brilliant diamond rings.
And when you soarI'll follow you
and watch you as you fly.
Until your citrine soul is free...
Oh look. Beans!!!! YUMMMM!!!*Note: You have to put 'O' instead of 'Oh' so you will know that it is a poem!!
Better re-snag it befur it MELTS!
ReplyDeleteHugz&Khysses,
Khyra
Oh wow Jack - U iza poet an'u provide us with good pikchurz tu follow the tale (or iz that tail?)
ReplyDeleteShiloh'n Shasta
yer a poet,
ReplyDeleteand you know it
cause,
like a donut
it's a hole,
for the soul
Just chew the frisbee....please!
Jack!
ReplyDeleteGreat tribute to your Frisbee!
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Have a great saturday!
Kisses and hugs
Lorenza
Jack
ReplyDeleteWhat fun with the frisbee and gee...what a great poem writer too. Who knew?? HA! Cool catch there dude!!
wags
jazzi
Jack. There is of course a line dedicated to you in the original - 'Forever panting , and forever young'.
ReplyDeleteROFLMBO!!!!
ReplyDeleteLiz
Jack,
ReplyDelete'O' you are a poet and your feet are
Longfellows. Mom is rolling on the floor...we actually thing your rendition of the poem is superb!!!
Happy Saturday and may your frisbee always have wings.
Madi and Mom
Great Job Jack!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOh, more of these please jack.
ReplyDeleteWill there be a haiku on tug ropes tomorrow?!
ReplyDeleteWow, you are good! Happy Labor Day.
ReplyDeletelicks and sniffs, Sasha
You do have a way with words, my friend....
ReplyDeleteMy grecian M really appreciated your grecian post. I, however, am trying to get caught up. What are you doing leaving comments on my blog on a holiday weekend??? Just messing with you as always.
ReplyDeletexoxoxo
Twinkie
You're quite the classical scholar, Jack!
ReplyDeleteYou're a poet, Jack!
ReplyDeleteLike your poem much better than the first. Made more sense. Please write more.
ReplyDeleteYOu are sooo funny! I guess that's why we luv you!
ReplyDeleteStar and Riley.
I want to have a citrine soul! Or beans. Yes! Beans it is!
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